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burnout_00
raw and uninhibited
his emotions are exhibited
his anger, his sadness, his dark cloud
put on display to draw a crowd

angry mob with guns and torches
they've come to burn his cardboard fortress
the transient will hurt their babies
rape their daughters, kill old ladies

god could come down and protect him
but it's his test, so the almighty neglects him
the man now thinks that he's rejected
not part of the heaven-worthy that god has selected

the bum gives in as he faces death
looks at the mob and breathes his last breath
no longer wonders why, just knows he's ready to die
goes into the next world believing that he is going to fry

HayZeus
Yikes! I'm sure glad I'm not that bum, but then again, I don't belief in comical afterlife and frying. :-O
burnout_00
uhh... i don't quite know what you're talking about but thanks for reading and responding... love love, burnout.
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