Ok i havent finished and its just barley started but.. do you think the chourus is good, and the start for the first verse? Its also suposed tobe a christian song

CHORUS:

Look in the miroir and what do i see, a scared little girl looking back at me, i dont wanna know, i dont wanna see, i dont wanna change at all, everything was great, i was fine, i dont wanna change, oh no, time can staythe same, i dont wanna change at all,

FIRST VERSE:

A typical day, it was horrible, i cant handle all this stuff goin on anymore, i need help, i need it now, but i cant say that out loud, they'd tihnk im crazy, every felt like you were all alone, ever felt like everything you did was wrong, i dont need help, i can do it on my own,

And thats all i got.. lol any suggestions?

Roze