I kiss thee not
Eventhough I want
Into eyes of brown
Bleak sadness in frown
Sheer fortunate bliss
If for, that one kiss

You love me not
Pain of a shot
Arrow to mine heart
Trouble, we must part
Your memory be distant
Surely I may miss it

Torture me not
My sorrow is frought
With daggers and chains
Can it be the same?
As the day upon first look
When the whole Earth had shook

Please leave me not
My soul doth hurt a lot
I will keep thee near
Even if it be no clear
You will always have a place
In warm lovers embrace

Ha Ha!

Please leave me not
My soul... doth hurt a lot?

It's beautiful, this part made me think of like a guy trying to be smooth, and then all of sudden being like, "What rymes with not....(look of inspiration on his face) doth...hurt...A LOT!!!!"

It really is a good poem this part just made me giggle. I love it.

Crude attempt here. I have a hard time with it sometimes. I start one and it goes overboard. I try to pull it back, but at that point my brain says "Don't change a thing." Me thinks I need to really try harder. Have a lovely morrow my darling friend.

NikkiSix
hollywoodsnoopy

I thought Shawn's message was cute. Ditzy??? Oh man, I am not one of those girls am I? I agree with you, "We all have our moments."

By the way this came because after Chris dropped me off this morning I said "This is the part I hate the most." He asked why and I refused to tell him. The poem says it all for me to him, eventhough he will never see it.

Nikster

This has a lot of vision, and expresses true feeling, I like this.

misty..

Thanks, it is pain for me really. I am infatuated with a man that may or may not have feelings for me and everytime he drops me off my impulse is to kiss him, but I never do it. Writing something out made me feel a tad better.

Big Hint. When second thoughts encourage you to change...don't. It was brilliant the way it was. Eloquently conveyed, graceful, classic. A keeper in short. That is two I have read, and two that have impressed me and moved me.

Warm regards,

Kevin

Kevin,

Thank you for your kind words and warmth. Much appreciated. I have been flooded by inspiration. It came to me last week and now it has passed. i can't stand that. I am not someone that just sits down to write. It hits me out of the blue for no apparent reason(just none that I can see).

Nikki

"Kiss Me"-
Nikki,
I have one word;

Muah!

xo

Shawn,

Muah, right back at ya babe. Thanks for the love.

Nikki