supani123
Jan 11, 2005, 11:45 AM
saviour
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When on a day
Iam soaking and sulking
Under thunders of a sudden rain
You took me to the covers
And sheltered me from the splashes
On another day
When winter whale winds
Are thrashing all my body
With chills and shrills
You lead me to warm chambers
And spread on me woolen rugs
thus protected me from the cold wraths
On some other midsummer day
When the severe sun began to
blast me with hot shines
you took me to some cool resorts
and extricated me from the odd encounters
WHO are you my dear!
You are my philosopher
Friend in need and a guiding star
None other than my lord beloved!
R.PURUSHOTHAMA RAO
Supani123@yahoo.com
flowerfairy
Jan 11, 2005, 07:07 PM
poetry in motion tends to work better if you use fewer lines at a time...