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and every girl is lovely 'til they break your heart
and he won't be a man until he breaks her heart
and both of them get cancer from the poison dart
and cupid's an assasin aiming for the heart

everything is wonderful when you are young
everything is perfect when you're young and dumb
and everybody's wonderful and comfortably numb
everything is great when you are dumb

and both of them get cancer from the poison dart
and blood is spilling everywhere from broken hearts
and youth is everlasting when you're young
youth is everlasting when you're young

until the end of time there will be broken hearts
right 'til the very end and from the very start
and both of them get cancer from the poison dart
and cupid's an assasin aiming for the heart
Unknown
love the loving life plesantly
tsunamic strides may srike high
patience gives you place in hearts
awake and arise till the goal is won
marisa
hey, danny

came to check out your poetry & I was really impressed,
you have a good thing going on here.

drop me a line,
<3marisa

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