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Justme88
You better pray i'm not suicidal
get down on your knees
clasp your hands together
look up at the sky
and pray

because if i die tonight
i pray it all gets blamed on you
and i pray you carry that guilt
for the rest of your life
though it will never compare
to the pain i'm feeling right now
you have no idea what this feels like

so you better pray i'm not suicidal
get down on your knees
clasp your hands together
look up at the sky
and pray
Obligated_Truths
Hmmm, it's beautiful, and also sends a hint of anger at the target.




---Josh
Unknown
a nice rendering
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the fleeing lot please be aware
live the life leaning on its hearts
beware and behold
the sun shine is on
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