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Justme88
I want to forgive you
but you've yet to deserve it

i've moved on
but you've yet to acknowledge it happened

i'm ready to try again
but you haven't even noticed something was wrong

I hate you sometimes
because you deserve it

and i don't want to move on
because you've yet to acknowlege it happened

And sometimes i'm NOT ready to move on
because you haven't even noticed something is wrong

I hate you
but i feel i have to love you

sometimes i want you dead
but later, i always feel bad for thinking that

i don't know what to do
make up your mind

do you want to be good
or do you want to be bad

because that will determine
if i love or hate you
Highguy
i'm not much of a poet, but i know what i like.
i think this is a great poem.

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