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Nicole
Darkness surrounds the love in my heart,
Clouding my mind, falling apart...
Tangled, confusing ropes I can't climb,
Escaping reality into a dream-like mind...
Closing my eyes,
Seeing you there,
No longer afraid,
No longer scared.
Walking beside you, holding your hand,
Knowing I'm only in a fairy-tale land.
Surpasing anguish, overcoming hate,
Able to accept an unacceptable fate,
One day I'll live,
One day I'll die,
I'm not alone though,
It's you and I.
Highguy
that was awesome
chaotic_serenity
great poem!

tip top job there nicole!
Unknown
love lasts forever
loving life sparkles dearer
supani123@yahoo.com
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