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caitiff
you came home
smelling like everything your told not to do
wobbling on your legs like a drunk sailor
glossy happy eyes
and patches of flush on your neck

you came home
after doing everything your told not to do
you were all most insane with the want
to tell someone, mabye even brag to someone
of this night achievements

you came home
looking like everyone your told not to look like
little skinmpy halter,
perfect pierced belly button
and ever so long flare legs

you came home
and our parents could have been standing on a tower
they were looking so far down at you
they gave you the evil eye
and all you did was laugh

you came hom
and i could have been standing in hell
i was looking so far up at you
you are everything i ever wanted to be
you walked before me cuttin your trail in life
and even now i'm trying to catch up

you came home
after a good night out
and i promised myself, one day i'd do the same
supani123
dear,
a nice memoir to young ones who made it early to heavens
exctly the feet of GOD
urs
supani
caitiff
thank you
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