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Highguy
looking foward to nothing,
nothing to look forward to,
why is life so emty?
why arent i like my father?

to much to do,
not enough to do,
fighting for nothing,
nothing to fight for.

you love me,
you hate me,
your the reason,
morning comes.
chaotic_serenity
i like it...

the opposites like:

"you love me,
you hate me"

and

"to much to do,
not enough to do"

work really well...

=)
Hey Hey
You need to spend more time with the spell checker and less time thinking of expletives.
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