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supani123
THE LIFE , ULTIMATE

I‘ve a flair for poetry
Reading volumes
And writing hundreds
Didn’t satisfy my soul


I’ve a fancy for dressing
Wearing full, half sleeves
T shirts with various colours and designs
didn’t satiate my taste




I ‘ve a caring for health
Eating only after verifying nutrition facts
And ignoring other foods
Didn’t stop bulging of my medical test


I’ve a hobby of loving
My gardening flora
And tending of pet fauna
Didn’t make my retired life happier


I’ve obedience towards deities
My daily chants of HIS GRACEFUL names
And eulogizing his greatness
Made me comfortable and contended all the time.



R.PURUSHOTHAMA RAO
Supani123@yahoo.com

caitiff
THANK YOU!!! i just read some (no offence to anyone, but this is a critique board) immature sob-sob poetry that is little more than'cry for me, life is pain'. anyways, your poetry was beautiful, spoke to me, was written well and has a good beat. i really like the floaty was this was written, speaking to one and all. thank you again, and please, keep posting
supani123
dear sir,
i thanq for the treat
''ll know more about u
urs
prao
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