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Evan..
Just the other day,

Its like,
Just the other day,
You were standing there…

Fair and bold,
How we didn’t know the things to unfold,
There was something,
That I could’ve told,

That you should be fair to life,
Value each day,
For each day is one second closer,
To your death,
Sooner or further,
It’s your choice.

I didn’t know you,
But I could’ve thought things through,
Talk to you,
See if there is a truth inside,

I wish I told you,
That you cant play with life,
Cheat death,
One too many times,

This time it caught up,
The way you were torn up,
These things happen,
It’s too late,
You chose your fate.

Evan Michael Daws © Copyright 2004

Out with the old

Out with the old in with the new,
As they say,
It’s what u said,
That dark,
Dark day.

In the corner I lie,
My head full of lies,
Not accepting the fact,
You didn’t want me back.

It hurts to realize,
But still all lies,
I loved you so,
Out with the old,
In with the new.

Was I an inanimate object,
Throughout your judgmental life,
Wasn’t I good enough,
I loved you.

Look at you,
You’re so fake,
Stop pretending,
You’re something your not,
You hypocritical f**k,

Out with the old,
In with the new.

Evan Michael Daws © Copyright 2004
Evan..
For you I Run

Run away with me,
Feel the things that we want to be,
Come escape reality,
With me.

Subconsciously,
I feel free,
Because I need,
You,
And me.

Its something I know is right,
A feeling,
I cannot fight.

I’d do anything to see you,
Because I know its true,

Travel and see,
What we can be,
Together.

I’ll give you my love,
My heart,
And my desire.


Because it’s for you,
For you,
Ill run…ill run

Evan Michael Daws © Copyright 2004
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~Evan I have been trying to pm you...but for some reason I am not logging in it wont work...lol...come see me at....the below link ok..biggrin.gif

http://s8.invisionfree.com/Too_much_time/index.php?act=idx
~Tracy~
QUOTE (Unknown @ Dec 17, 07:49 AM)
~Evan I have been trying to pm you...but for some reason I am not logging in it wont work...lol...come see me at....the below link ok..biggrin.gif

http://s8.invisionfree.com/Too_much_time/index.php?act=idx

BTW Evan!...lol...this is ~Tracy~..biggrin.gif
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