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Takashimaya
Never say...

for Sean

Never say you love me,
if you really don't care.
Never talk about feelings
if they aren't really there.
Never hold my hand,
if you’re going to break my heart.
Never say you are going to,
if you don't plan to start.
Never look into my eyes,
if all you do is lie.
Never say hello,
if you really mean goodbye.
If you really mean forever,
then say you will try.
Never say forever,
’cause forever makes me cry…
angelroze
Wow, did you seiroulsy write that?? that was like realy good. like i loved the wya it ryhmed like in that certain way, and i just wow.. lol i honlesty dont even know wat to say (which isnt often) but it touched me, and i tihnk that it was great.
Takashimaya
QUOTE (angelroze @ Nov 29, 09:43 PM)
Wow, did you seiroulsy write that?? that was like realy good. like i loved the wya it ryhmed like in that certain way, and i just wow.. lol i honlesty dont even know wat to say (which isnt often) but it touched me, and i tihnk that it was great.

Yes I really wrote it, I was pleased with it, and felt I would share it with those of you who still use this forum. I left a long time ago, but was hoping someone who's opinion is important to me would read and comment, but no such like...

Thank you for your encouragement.
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