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burnout_00
it'll never go away
this loneliness is here to stay
i need her desperately
she deals with all that's wrong with me

and now no one is here
but there's people all around me
they're always all around me
and still nobody's found me

i need her here with me
need her here so desperately
need her here to rescue me
need her here to rescue me

she's too good for her own good
that may be why she left me here
it may be why she isn't here
she isn't here right now

old school poem. it's not so dirty scummy die world die. it's love baby, love love love.
caitiff
good change from 'die world die' sh*t. love is the key. always always the key.
Highguy
what the f**k is that guy talking about?
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