eastofjordan
Nov 09, 2004, 06:48 AM
Just something I wrote to a friend. It's in verse, so I've posted it.
ej
I met a girl a year ago,
with deep red hair
and eyes so fair...
but I digress, you know.
A thief she was (or so it seemed)
stealing the hearts of all us guys,
coming back to invade our dreams
and teasing us with lovely eyes.
Anyway I have chattered on.
I bet you're wond'ring what's the point.
A year has passed, not seeming long;
We still hang around this old joint
just waiting I guess, for our hearts,
maybe our dreams, to return, and
with some crafty acts on our part
you'll come with them, my red head friend
cool
Nov 10, 2004, 05:14 AM
notcokanyatallunlessebeforetheiespeciallyafterh
itsinhiseyes
Nov 10, 2004, 07:02 AM
streuth, you're right there me ol cobber cool guv. that comment was not knock kneeded at all.
cool
Nov 10, 2004, 09:25 AM
True cool laughing!!! He He Ho Ho. Cool start to evening.
eastofjordan
Nov 10, 2004, 02:59 PM
Cockney? I'd have never imagined.
eastofjordan
Nov 11, 2004, 08:25 AM
Jasper, what happened to what you posted? It's gone!! It was about inverse and verse and blah blah. Trying to psych me out?
cool
Nov 11, 2004, 08:31 AM
carrot up to cool cockney tricks!!!
eastofjordan
Nov 12, 2004, 07:01 AM
when you're everyone's best friend
who is there for you?
Sure you're a great guy and
maybe attractive too,
but what good is it if they all say the same.
Lord, I know She's somewhere about,
just help me out:
Tell me her name.
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