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burnout_00
Nothing is for certain
life is certainly not fair
one minute you waste oxygen
the next you aren't there

my angel wings are ripping
and my sanity is slipping
god is love and god is tripping
'cause he heard that i lost faith

no goal in life's worth trying for
nothing in life's worth dying for
no one in life's worth crying for
there's nothing left to do...

nothing is for certain
life is certainly not fair
one minute you waste oxygen
the next you aren't there
caitiff
wow. i really liked the poem....you have a good way of laying things down and making them sound smooth
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