misty_tears
Nov 02, 2004, 02:40 AM
Sweet seasoned tears
coated her eyes that day
a swollen slippery mess
the nile came crashing
down her puffed cheeks
slowly drenching her garments
and flooding the floor around her
petals of a rose glide
down to the ground to
greet the ever so growing nile
-these tears were wept for you-
She loves me...
She loves me not...
She loves me...
She loves me not...
....She loves me
She......loves me not....
-these petals crumble for you-
as she is submerged in
a warm sea salty water
the stem of the desolate rose
floats to the top of the water
to dance with renewed life
as the girl is left to the depths
of the sea
Jasper
Nov 02, 2004, 02:47 AM
You little minx you: this is so cute!
I'm talking about the poem and your avtar
Very very nice iceberg for any titan to slip into!
Just don't drown the penguins!
Love Jasper
misty_tears
Nov 02, 2004, 02:50 AM
thanks jasper. thank you for your sweet and lovely comments..
misty..
itsinhiseyes
Nov 02, 2004, 03:09 AM
Yep cute. short and sweet.
+Steven Curtis Lance
Nov 02, 2004, 03:13 AM
Exquisitely beautiful, Rasha; you are truly blooming. I always love your poems, but you have really blessed us with some extraordinary beauty today in your postings.
Thank you with all my heart for your support of my own work, and for your encouragement.
misty_tears
Nov 02, 2004, 03:40 AM
merci steven et itisinhiseyes..
misty..
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