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high guy
farewell to those who knew me
for all those days that were gloomy
not to say good bye, only a new way to say hi
sometimes i want to sit and cry

no i dont want to go there
now i dont even care
so much to hide and share
so strong i just can't bare

a new beginning or so they say
seems to me just anthor day
with the same old life and sh*t
i ask myself why i should deal with it
burnout_00
"farewell to those who knew me" damn gilbert, right on! keep postin' dogg, told you mind-brain is the downest!!!!
+Steven Curtis Lance
This really is a great poem. I have been haunted by it for hours, since I first read it.

Welcome among us, new friend and fellow poet.
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