Torn to pieces

(you can never leave me alone)

Vengeful sounds
smother me in plastic
drench my veins
and hang my head at your door!

A very very well locked door......but more of I war cry from over here in OZ.
I hate Barbie and Ken too! And they're always trying to scalp me here also, so I duck quickly and quack em all back down!

Very good!

Respect Jasper

Words of power, my love.

"smother me in plastic"

is a shattering and an unforgettable line; I can relate to it in a disturbing way.

We understand each other... I know you will understand my sonnet about holidays too.

Remember the line from my teacher Frank Pooler's song?

"I wish I were with you, I wish I were with you..."

I love you.

Hey Silke!

Can't get this damn piece out of my head, and I would like to add some of my spin to it?

May I copy a draft to do so?

I will publish it on your behalf only, I promise!


Love Jasper

Is it better I don't understand this? Is it better I understand this? I would love to understand this because it has obvious power. I want a piece of it, but what ever threads of meaning knit the lines together, they are hiding from me. Sometimes a poem is best left unexplained. I understand that and would never press its author to reveal all. Jasper seems to understand it, or does he? More questions. I take it that Steven understands it. Am I being a dimwit?

Uh! I think I just got it. Oh dear. I hope it's not as morbid as I think. I'll just have to wait for Jasper's spin on it and hope that sheds more light.

....*****HUGS****

~Much Love~
Megan

Powerful with few words...I love it. I wish it were not based on truth, but I know it is.

Take care dear sister!

Love ya!