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Pan


Here in silent shadows I lie,
waiting to kill
like a McDonalds french fry.



burnout_00
lol. i fuckin love it dude. right on. love love love.
flowerfairy
but mc donalds frenc4 fries dont lie in silent s4adows, t4ey lie in obnoxious bri94t yellow and oran9e striped boxes
flowerfairy
(by t4e way t4e letters t4at 4 and 9 represent are disabled on my keyboard for some reason so i 4ave to use t4e numbers...)
Hey Hey
Makes it more interesting. Maybe we should all disable some keys!
Pan
thanks for your responses. I know mc french fries don't literally lie in shadows. I meant that their deadly nature is masked, is hidden, is unknown to most, and so in that sense, they are lieing in shadows waiting to kill. The lieing in shadows was meant figuratively I guess.

I know this little poem fragment is rather absurd, but this poetry doesn't really come naturally to me and I thought some people might appreciate this little fragment of absurdity.
flowerfairy
frenc4 fries do literally lie in obnoxious yellow and oran9e striped boxes, but i also meant it as a metap4or. because, fi9uratively speakin9, i dont really see 4ow frenc4 fries lie in s4adows w4en everyone knows t4at frenc4 fries are pretty damn bad for you.
Dan
has anybody here seen the movie Super Size Me? It seems to show McDonalds as dangerous, although there are those who disagree.
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