Thinking

The clarity
The complacency
The settled
Little region of fog
Swirling
Faster
Pressure
Eager
Not quite pain
Not quite ecstasy
Not quite there
Coming
Nearly
Almost
Yes
The thought
The next word
The line
The end

©2004 Hey Hey

I very much like the linearity of this.

Those one-word lines are sharp and very effective.

Linearity, that's what this poem has. I like it very much.

Thanks Steven. One worders are about all I can muster at the moment!

Ah, but, "a word in season, how pleasant it is!"

oh,yes...still as powerful as ever.*smiles* i'm still speechless. still thinking.....



misty...

Thanks all.