Telepathy
tell that to me
just a look
is all it took
knew just what
I meant to say
understood the
unheard way
within my mind
perception came
exposed the poem
through quiet play
though strokes of shape
spread out the page
arranged around
without a sound
spoke inside my head.
Silence shows
so many things
from where we’re born
it’s where we’ll lay
wish without words
my message could convey
when it all returns
initiation of this passage
you will come to see
beginning of this composition
became what’s been displayed.

Yes!

Yes, indeed!

There is brilliance here, the brilliance of the inner light.

One structural aspect which I like very much is the gradual lengthening of the lines, the unfolding even as the lotus! I think I get it!

I always find your poetry to be profoundly spiritual and insightful.

Your work always speaks to my heart. I should have mentioned this before...

Well, at least I have told you now. I really must reply to more posts! Sorry I'm always so busy.

In any case, V~L, you are one of my favorites on these pages.

I am honored that two successful writers and generous persons would compliment this work!

I enjoy reading each of your works, Hey Hey and +Steven, I really should comment more too.

Bl*ssings,

V~L

(michael)

Very good!