Hard Thud

Hard thud
At the top
Of my skull
In my bed

Dull ache
Inside
Unconsciousness
In my mind

Painful sensation
At the tip
Of my finger
In the fire

Faint sound
At the surface
Of the ground
Above my grave

Blinding light
At the end
Of the tunnel
In my head

©2004 Hey Hey



(((((((((( EREH KCILC ))))))))))

Brilliant Hey Hey.


(Click Here didn't work for me.)

Thanks V~L. Sorry, for some unknown reason BTInternet stopped the link last night. I have just tried and it's been resumed. But then again, I only pay £30 per month for my internet facility so how reliable can I expect it to be?

Really, my friend, this is a very fine poem indeed; damned fine.

I do think you're getting better all the time. I had better leave off replying now and try to write something better than my last silly sonnet about asses and glasses... (Besides, my fingers are frozen.)

You're blooming, and I'm proud of you, my friend.

Appreciate your comments Steven.

Brilliant

Many thanks Silke.