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Jordan MacDonald
All you player haters, rich bitches, and snobs
listen up, listen up

im sick and tired of you
crushing everybodies hopes and dreams
you know you do
so don't denie
it leads more lies
just what we don't need
pain and suffering
it spreads
and soon we'll all dread it
this is ma shout-out to all you
please don't let it by
and hopefully evil will die
we won't have to worry about
right and wrong
left and right
up and down
living or dying
it won't matter then
because we'll all be rid of sins...
that girl
traditional, aggressive, and loud.

Nice poem, I look forward to the next.
Hey Hey
Ditto from me
rosediamond
Taking a stand! I like it! I think that girl summarized my comments on it quite nicely. Welcome to Mind-Brain!

~Much Love~
Megan
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