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JNash
It’s kind of like I was playing a game with my self
Chess, poker maybe
Cutting off pathways
Dodging right, dodging left
Making things random
Seeing what happened
In the cleft, the abyss, the eternal bright light
Of my mind of my spirit of my faith
There is something
Does it really matter what
It’s there
It has to be
I’m here
You’re here
Everybody is here
We can’t all be delusional
We all experience
The highs, the lows, the in betweens
All there is for you, there is for me
The key
Is to grab it snatch it hold it keep it
Have faith that you can
That you will
That it is someone’s will
That you have have live love
and cherish
Life
Hey Hey
This is very nice. It seems to have changes in pace at exactly the right times. The differing punctuation styles threw me a bit, but no matter, a fine poem.
V~L
Ups for Minneapolis...i used to live there...one of the best cities around in my opinion.

Excellent delivery and subject matter here JNash.

Bl*ssings.
rosediamond
Great work, JNash! The energy in this piece is refreshing.

~Much Love~
Megan
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