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Justme88
I kissed my best friend
or rather he kissed me

It just happened so fast
yet was not unexpected

It sent a shiver through my skin
and right up through my lips

I felt his heart speed up a bit
and a force exhert from his mouth

and moments later his head was beside mine again
but that did not last that long

For after both our breaths were caught
the kissing started again

my best friend kissed me
or rather i kissed him

and it made the world feel extremely right
and put everything in it's place

and when all was said and done
nothing had really changed

I did not kiss my best friend
nor did he kiss me

we simply touched our lips for a single moment
and reset the world, to our liking
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this is awesome


i love it
Justme88
thank you any other comments
Rick
It's beautiful. I like the idea of resetting the world to your liking.
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