sleeping always
sleep is always
or so it would seem
living in a dream

floating classroom, sinking floors
lock the big asylum doors
strapped securely in my seat
my puffy thunder cloud

rocking slowly, lullabye
smile politely, wave good bye
tuck in time
it's time to fly

sleeping always
sleep is always
float off from the crowd
on my puffy thunder cloud

that shits down

This is a great poem. It is actually not very difficult to interpret, but has enough possible interpretations to keep the reader guessing.

sleeping always
sleep is always

This is so good. I wonder if, at the end, we will all sleep for always?

You should have called this 'Burnout Everything', as it does it all every well. Loved the the pun intended where you 'Tucked time up good and proper'!
Parting thou lips ain't such sweet sorrow as you shake this sphere very well with its wide eyed Whirwilly...oppps...I mean, pool? Got sleep in my eyes for a second there....sorry!

Jasper

I wish i knew what the f**k you were saying but i didn't quite follow. Thanks for reading anyhow. love love love.

Now listen properly........IT....IS.......BRILLIANT?
It could be about simply jumping into your car and smoking up the tyres to escape the crowd: or it could also be about jumping into a universal black hole just to see what's on the other side....sleepwalking of course!
Like durrrrrrr....its all in the translation, so stay on ya f**king horse big fella...woooo up there!
Was that slow enough for you!

Respect Jasper

come again

Having passed this by the first time without a comment I'm compelled to tell you now that I have just laughed out load at the confuddlement ensuing in your reading of Jaspers replies. "come again". I had exactly the same reaction when I first came across his zany replies. However, stick with him, get on his wavelength if you can, force your way through all the typos and idiosyncratic phrasing and you'll find it worth your while.

I really enjoyed your poem, especially on the second reading.