Seascape Continuum

The sea spray falls upon your face
You walk the beach with tranquil grace
As glistening sun breaks misty haze
Your smile to meet the morn amaze

The sea spray sparkles on your breast
Divine, angelic as your quest
Your beauty softens gathering seas
As in your wake they yearn to please

The sea spray is your seraph's touch
Makes low in sky a rainbow arch
To calm the ships on grey sea crest
Ensuring safety, they be blessed

The sea spray freshness in your breath
As inspiration is your wealth
And merging sea with steely sky
Continuum, forever why

©2004 Hey Hey

This is excellent.

I wrote a scene of the ocean last week in critique,
but I really didn't capture the essence of the place, as you did.

You intuitively combined the essence of the ocean with that of adoration.

Too kind. It means a lot to me. Many thanks.

Hey hey. your obsession is paying off. This is real good.

Appreciate your appreciation.