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Listen to my pillow
It gently repeats my dreams
Quietly gathered in its filling
A quick fluff sets them free
Hey Hey
Absolutely beautiful. What a wondersful idea and how well expressed as a poem. This is material for a 21st century book of poetry. That is, a standard, for ever. I want to pin it "at the top" for a bit.

Congratulations!

Hey Hey
that girl
Thanks for making my day. Your comments means so much to me. I appreciate it biggrin.gif
Gattaca
yea,i liked it much
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