that girl
Oct 09, 2004, 07:56 PM
- Pillow -
Listen to my pillow
It gently repeats my dreams
Quietly gathered in its filling
A quick fluff sets them free
Hey Hey
Oct 10, 2004, 06:22 AM
Absolutely beautiful. What a wondersful idea and how well expressed as a poem. This is material for a 21st century book of poetry. That is, a standard, for ever. I want to pin it "at the top" for a bit.
Congratulations!
Hey Hey
that girl
Oct 10, 2004, 09:15 AM
Thanks for making my day. Your comments means so much to me. I appreciate it