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Ace Winhigher
Has it come true,
Is this for real?
Love at fist sight,
Is this what I feel?
Is it true,
Can it really be?
Is fate playing a joke,
Is this destiny?
So many questions,
I ask in my mind.
Who would have thought,
You I would find.
I must know,
What you think.
Will this feeling float,
Or to the bottom sink.
Nervous now,
My voice breaks.
I must push on,
Do what it takes.
Hello,
That’s what I’ll say.
How are you,
Or it’s a nice day.
Just hello,
That will do.
Wonder if you love me,
Like I love you.
IzaMarie
It flows and has meaning, at least to me. I understand everything your conveying through the poem.
iican
sweet flow,nice very nice
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