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rhymer
When all is said and done,
no humans will be left.
I wonder who will bury
the final one bereft.
Rick
That's very sad. I suppose he will be food for the fishes or something.
Hey Hey
Not sad, just the way it might be. Like.......when someone dies, the way it is. Beautiful really.
Unknown
I think after a million of so people die...the people left arent goingto be too worried about burying the bodies, if anything theyd burn em but then again, where would every body fit?

hmm, this is getting too analytical.

im baked
Rick
They say that caffeine is a THC antagonist, if you feel the need to get analytical.
rhymer
I guess that if the last one is practically bent, he or she will dig a hole with a pre-prepared pile of soil above and some sort of contraption which will cover his or her body with it when triggered by his or her fall into the hole.
Since most of us are bent some way or other, please follow the instructions!!!
Rick
Ah, yes, we must have our priorities well ordered. Last things last.
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