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Torpor
Halo

When my eyes touch
your delicate complexion,‎
visions caress my mind;‎
lucidity and tranquility
fill me inside.‎
I see the big hazy blue
and the hopeful horizon‎
spreading across my skies.‎
I see the arching clouds,‎
racing through my eyes,‎
and halos of luminance
trickling through,‎
like transient crowns of light,‎
fashioned with purity
to be bestowed upon your head,‎
your majesty.‎

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©® ReZel
eastofjordan
I like it. Talk of the horizon, luminance and bestowing is stuff I need to read. And the last four lines are amazing. Good work.
Hey Hey
very nice indeed.
Torpor
thank you kindly
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