Touch me, Love me, Hold me, Kiss me
Squeeze me, Tease me, Lick me, Eat me

Pull me close and ???? me, beat me
Climb on top, lets do it missionary

Hucklebuck and doggystyle me
Turn me over and beat me slowly

Don't forget to taste me, eat me
And when you bust just skeet all on me

Touch me, Love me, Hold me, Kiss me
Squeeze me, Tease me, Lick me, Beat me

QueenBossy,

I started with the one you wrote first, hoping that the next wouldn't be as bad as the last.
I was wrong. As I read it, my only thought was "Huh?".
Not that what I think matters or that you may have wrote a bad poem.
It's how you ultimately feel about it.
I just don't get it, but then people don't get or like alot of my work either.


Until...

Hello Queenbossy.
While I don't have anything to really say about the poem, other than for you to continue to improve your style, and keep writing, I am one of the mods here, and while I don't have any control over this particular board, I find it unnecessary for you to post the same write two, three times, and it can come across as an annoyance to many of the readers/posters here.

I would like to see this board used in a more appropriate manner, so if you don't mind, could you please, pick the format and style that you like the most and at lease delete the other two posts of this identicle piece.

I'd like to avoid redundancy, and avoid someone possibly scaring off other potential poets from posting, and I would like to discourage other's from doing this as well.

I hope you understand.

Thank you,
Aiyana