I Feel You Watching


I feel you watching
My body responds before the first touch of my hand or caress of my finger
Knowing your eyes are all for me
Knowing my movements, my intentions are driving you wild
I'm making myself crazy
I want you………..
I want your eyes on me, your mouth on mine, your hands on my body
I close my eyes and picture you watching, my imagination supplying the fuel for the fire within me
Making me burn
Knowing the fire is spreading, making you burn as well, only intensifies the ecstasy
I am no longer pleasuring myself
My imagination has taken over, and you are now with me, spreading the flames of the fire within us
As you spread my legs to enter deeply, making me explode around you, making the flames leap higher
Until with driving tempo they are doused between our joined bodies
Drowned in the evidence of our passion
Slowly, my imagination relinquishes it's hold
And I am again alone but not
You are still here
I feel you watching


Michelle
April 16, 2004

This is definately a heated write. No doubt about it. You have definately stirred some heat within my imagination for the images are very accurate of this woman's hot fantasies.
But may I offer some suggestions in format so some paragraphs don't overwhelm others, and can also lend to intensify the words, giving it a even more sensational feel...?

I feel you watching
My body responds before..
the first touch of my hand
or caress of my finger
Knowing your eyes are all for me
Knowing my movements..
my intentions.....
are driving you wild
I'm making myself crazy
I want you………..
I want your eyes on me,
your mouth on mine,
your hands on my body
I close my eyes and picture you watching,
my imagination supplying the fuel for the fire within me
Making me burn
Knowing the fire is spreading..
making you burn as well,
only intensifies the ecstasy
I am no longer pleasuring myself
My imagination has taken over,
and you are now with me,..
spreading the flames of the fire within us
As you spread my legs to enter deeply,
making me explode around you.....
making the flames leap higher
Until with driving tempo..
they are doused between our joined bodies
Drowned in the evidence of our passion
Slowly,
my imagination relinquishes it's hold
And I am again alone but not
You are still here
I feel you watching

Just a suggestion.

Hope you don't mind.

Safe journey
Aiyana

Michelle,


VERY NICE WORK!!!!

It would seem I 've found someone whose imagination works almost as hard as mine.



Keep 'em coming.


Until...

Thank you for the suggestions Poets---I don't mind at all and it does seem to help the poem flow a bit better. I will remember that for the next time.

And thanks also for the comments all. Sometimes my mind works overtime and my imagination does indeed kick into overdrive. It's either write it down, or never get any peace.

Michelle