Succulent sather
Sweet to the toungue
Passionate rather
Than mild and undone
Taste me and try me
You'll like what you lick
Tickled with ecstacy
I am no trick
Peppermint burns
And sugar's too sweet
Lemon drop yearns
To be your naughty tr

This has a sultry feel to it, perhaps one's mind can linger on the erotic aspects of this write, as well. For this certainly does not feel like a candy commercial or an advertisement for Lemon Heads, lol.

I am only going to assume you meant to finish this last line with the last word being, treat?
"To be your naughty tr".

That is the only potential [error?] I saw here.

I enjoyed the imagery here, a lot. Runs smooth and as always you manage to bring a flair of heat into your writes.

Great work, and very inspiring.


Blessed Be!
Aiyana

I very much like how you write poetry so fluidly. It sweeps the reader away with such subtlety you don't realize it has happened until the last word is read. Lovely.

~Much Love~
Megan

Sexy fun - what life should be about!