thehasbeen
Sep 13, 2004, 11:16 PM
you ignored it
it ignored you
but it and you
always come back
its meant to be
poetsn2ition
Sep 23, 2004, 03:49 PM
"you ignored it
it ignored you
but it and you
always come back
it[']s meant to be"
"you ignored it
it ignored you
but it and you
always come back
its [it is] meant to be"
Just a few grammarical suggestions.
Your point about Life's unfairness, and your willingness to try and accept this as a part of Life, your life, speaks clearly to me.
A good write.
Aiyana
rosediamond
Sep 23, 2004, 05:13 PM
Grammatical issues aside, this packs a lot of meaning behind it. It may not seem like it on the surface, but behind the words are a history, and this is akin to a current confusing stage in my life. Thank you for the contribution.
~Much Love~
Megan
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