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thehasbeen
you ignored it
it ignored you
but it and you
always come back

its meant to be
poetsn2ition
"you ignored it
it ignored you
but it and you
always come back

it[']s meant to be"

"you ignored it
it ignored you
but it and you
always come back

its [it is] meant to be"

Just a few grammarical suggestions.

Your point about Life's unfairness, and your willingness to try and accept this as a part of Life, your life, speaks clearly to me.

A good write.

Aiyana

rosediamond
Grammatical issues aside, this packs a lot of meaning behind it. It may not seem like it on the surface, but behind the words are a history, and this is akin to a current confusing stage in my life. Thank you for the contribution.

~Much Love~
Megan
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