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Life unraveling
dreams coming true
opens awareness
inside pure mind
cleansing karmic experience
secrets trusting in spirit
compassion builds laughter
humour non-judging
trying innocence
in childhood inn
innocence trying
non-judging humour
laughter builds compassion
spirit in trusting secrets
experience karmic cleansing
mind pure inside
awareness opens
true coming dreams
unraveling life.
caitiff
i really like it. the style is good and smooth. keep posting!
pashmina
wow! i love palindroems!! i had not seen one like this before. The longest one i know of is this, you may enjoy!!: "raft on sail o gnome mongolia's not far." you have to appreciate! smile.gif
Hey Hey
Very clever, even with the full stop and oem. Perfection is for the gods, striving for perfection is for humans.
pashmina
oem?
read it again... it goes all the way the same forwards and backwards
Hey Hey
Just me being a bit dotty! And my spectacles are 2 years out of date.

The palindroem is tremendous.
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