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caitiff
Reality and ever changing perceptions and
Ever changing mentalities that switch the color of my your iris
And you look at life through different eyes
Choose a place you want to be
Choose carefully think deep like you’ve never thought before
Dig deep into consciousness and sub consciousness
Fall into the light of you
The light that shines forth from your mind and
Spins around your eyelids like a lighthouse beacon
Place yourself in your time slot time cut
A place pulled forth from memories millenniums ago
When you were a child and you could keep your balance on your bike
When you were possessed by the wind and tried so hard to fly from your roof
The broken ribs the chipped tooth
And the jello they gave you at the hospital
Place yourself in the time loop of memories
Think long think fast
Remember the taste of fresh mad mud pies
What the snow shoved down the front of your shirt feels like
Pull up memories of skinned knees and beestings
The feel in your heart after your first kiss
The feel in your heart after it first cracked
Shove yourself into places you haven’t been in years
Dusty places so long old
The things you did you don’t want to remember
The things you did you wish you remember more

Don’t forget to remember child
Never forget to remember
Memories are what dreams and eternity are made of child
Never forget to remember
caitiff
yea i know....mabye good point shitty wording though
Unknown
beautiful ideas and images. Doesn't come across as wine to the taste, but as you noted, perhaps too harshly, the wording could be improved a bit and made more fluid. Good job though.
itsinhiseyes
To hell with the wording. That can always be improved or edited. The ideas though and the imagery. Wow. I'm fast becoming a fan.
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