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that girl
-Taco-

Minute pieces
of gathered brown,
Fresh green segments,
Sunny shreds,
And soft chunks of mild scarlet
Rest in a package
wrapped with a golden shield
rosediamond
Mmmm...Tacos. Now I'm hungry. huh.gif It's not one of your best, but it's not so bad I'm going to diss it entirely. And interesting (and hunger-inducing) write. happy.gif

~Much Love~
Rose
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