Ciscendental Sonnet # ?

This side of the line it tastes and it hurts
That side of the line go beyond when it bursts
This side of the line TV and Sega
That side of the line thought is too mega
This side of the line tripping the way
That side of the line no need to play
This side of the line diet and train
That side of the line no point no pain
This side of the line shove it no care
That side of the line going nowhere
This side of the line making a killing
That side of the line no-one is willing
This side of the line take or be taken
That side of the line never be waken
This side of the line live for tomorrow
That side of the line died with much sorrow
This side of the line eternity never
That side of the line timeless forever
This side of the line stay transcendental
That side of the line gone ciscendental

©2004 Hey Hey

Inspired by my good friend +Steven Curtis Lance

ps This is not a sonnet - I wouldn't be so bold. The title is just a title.

Which way did he go, Georgie?...

Very good, very fast paced, very observant.
Sorry for the penned joke, there, but rhythm of this piece just brought it out in me.

I enjoyed this very much, how you managed to keep the flow, and even with the repetive usage of the 'this side, that side' it brougt to mind, a flow that was both easy to read, easy to relate, and even easier to appreciate.

Blessed Be!
Aiyana

I really enjoyed reading this....Thanks for sharing.

I do appreciate your reading. Thank you.

Whoa. I need to sit down. Dizzyyyyy. I agree very much with Aiyana. It is a remarkably fast-paced, yet understandable piece. I ACTUALLY UNDERSTOOD! I think I deserve a cookie for that . . .

~Much Love~
Megan

Ha Ha! I don't know where some of these come from! Well obviously inspired by Steven's sonnet's title but the rest.........