Paperbag Wtiter
Aug 30, 2004, 05:15 PM
Contagious
Gods visit me most every night
The gods of terror, gods of fright
As I think to shed the day
And every night to find a way
To shake these demons, move them on
Try new ways to make them gone
They 'gain appear and start their torture
To indicate I have no future
Spoil my chance to reach some peace
In sleep, unconsciousness release
But worse now, as I look around
New subjects now my gods have found
Contagious, plague-like I've become
Systematic, one by one
The writers, painters, poets too
Yes my friend …. it's entered you
©2004 Paperbag Writer
poetsn2ition
Sep 09, 2004, 07:13 AM
I like the meter, the style, the rhyme, the flow...
Me living in the 'darkside' with many demons of my own (sorry they are not gods to me. ie; a GOD has the ability to create growth, demon's only know destruction [just my opinion, no reflection upon your choice of wording, it works for you, right]), I, totally, get your write.
Safe journey
Aiyana
Hey Hey
Sep 09, 2004, 01:41 PM
Thanks Aiyana.
poetsn2ition
Sep 10, 2004, 05:31 AM
No prob, very vivid write about the torment one endurs in life.
enlightening to say the least.
Aiyana
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