Ive come to realize all my doubts is because I care about the other doubts

up and down
and i stand still

Trading a mind for a better one
to smash the hold that control has over us

order, masturbation, self control, reliance, defended
they will scream at you until you take noticed

for all i know..
we are all on different levels of understanding

so dont scream at me on my level.
unless, of course, youre on it with me

its all different from me to you

I'm no authority on style and beyond the points made (taken and shrugged), I like this. Shows true thought and feeling. Maybe I misinterpret the connotations and if so, it's even better. Indeed we could all work together for poetry!

Exactly.