Hey Hey
Aug 25, 2004, 02:32 PM
True Friends
The door is closed
My head is bowed
The rain it pours
Polkadot yard
I sit on the step
Look at the stream
Takes my pack
Takes my energy
Turn my head
Light in the window
Face at the door
Too quick to respond
Shaking head
Shrugging shoulders
Pick up my collar
Chill in the air
Sun goes down
Aching back
Still sitting
Waiting it out
Hear the door
Smiling face
Arms around
True friends always make up at bedtime
©2004 Hey Hey
rosediamond
Aug 27, 2004, 12:31 PM
Hmmm....I don't know if there is sexuality implied in this poem or not...I'm a little slow...But that's what I picked up on. Maybe I'm just perverted.

Nicely done.
Hey Hey
Aug 27, 2004, 12:58 PM
Actually, mum was calling. Or so I thought!?!
rosediamond
Aug 27, 2004, 01:04 PM
Whoa! Okay, my mind was in the wrong place! Backing away from that one. Wooo. Sorry, sugar high. Heh heh.
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