Waiting for you
Slide into me…….let me wrap you in warm, wet ecstasy
Caressing your hardness with infinite softness
Silk and satin against steel
Liquid heat….burning fire
Start the dance….bodies joining
Pulsing together
Driving together
Towards heaven

Hi Michelle...

I like to derive the title from the text if a title seems to be implicit within the text; often this arises from either the first, last, or climactic lines/phrases. In the case of this poem, either the first line or the last line would make equally good titles, to my mind, thus:

Waiting for You

or

Towards Heaven

Alternatively, you could try:

Start the Dance

What do you think? I hope this has been helpful to you.

Do be encouraged in your poetry; I think this is a good one.

Respect and Solidarity.

Thank you Steven. I was actually leaning toward Start the Dance, but just wasn't sure. I also like to keep the titles of my poems connected with the topic within them in some way.
Thank you very much for your support and input.

Michelle

Yes, I feel like

Start the Dance

is the very best solution too.

I'm so glad I was able to help reinforce you in what your heart had already told you was right!

I have learned to always go with my intuition, and to never second-guess that still small voice which always knows what's right.

Do be encouraged in your wonderful work.

Respect and Solidarity.

i like poems with no title

or a title that holds about 5% of the poems meaning.

how about: Embracing Heaven

wow steven, just cuz i said my own opinion, You therefore, arent going to say yours anymore?

youre giving your power away to external devices.

how easy it is to sway the mob.

I reckon you should call it "Cause of a Controversy"

Hey Hey

yes,. I reckon so

Agreement? Faint....Boring.... ZZZZZZZzzzzzzzz

I've also got sum degrees. Can I say rat's a*s and F**K anyone here as well?

Hey F**KING Hey and good on you Steven!

What's a SCHLAPP tail? I'll have to update my biology!

Hey

This may or may not be appropriate, since I really have no idea the goings on behind the scences prior to my joining, but
YOU GUYS CRACK ME UP!!!!!


And I mean that in the best of ways.
Michelle

Oh and Steven,
Yes I love sonnets, very much so. I've read several of yours and haven't found a one yet that I haven't enjoyed. And no matter what anyone ELSE might say or feel--feel free to give me pointers and advise whenever you feel like it, and of course, especially when it's asked in a public setting.

Anytime, Steven, Anytime


Maybe you can tell me how I can post my picture beside my name? Having trouble with that and it's ticking me off. LOL
Meesh

Thank you Steven, I will be sure to ask one of them then.
And I am sure you did not mean stupid---such a negative word and doesn't appear to apply to you at all.
I prefer either Computer Illiterate or Technologically Challenged
They have a much better ring to them, don't you agree??
Meesh

you want peace on earth?!?!?
HUH? DO YA?!!?!??


F**K the F**K out of me then!

we cant even get along on the internet

pffft! good luck with the world!!!!

Peace and calm everyone. We are all beautiful people. Well I'm an ugly duckling, but you know what I mean!

Hey Hey

i dont get along with ugly people


they scare me

My father used to say that it takes two to start a fight. Man, was he ever wrong. Just ask the Poles after the Nazi invasion.

I think you hit the nail right on the head, Rick

Bang!

Will not be docile,
Will not be repentant,
Grinning and playful,
Can never be reverent.

Hard to define,
But ever so sentient!


Michelle, from the main Forum page, at the bottom, go to FAQ, and then read the topic on posting pictures.

[FONT=Geneva][SIZE=7][COLOR=purple]Thank You Rick!!!!!
Big hugs and smooches to you.
I think I did it.
Michelle

Yes, you did. Nice picture.

Rick, you've had a makeover! Now you look like Roger Whittaker!

Heyyyyyyyyyy

rick looks like this dude i knew in OR that lived across the street from my friends house.


someone, with the technology, should take a picture of their eye ball and post it. thatd rock.

From the rear!

Thank you Rick

from the rear tire?

you look like that chic off of 8mile, eff.

Steven,
I am distressed to hear that your wife is in fragile health. My prayers are with you both that she makes a speedy and complete recovery. It's a shame that individuals in our society are unable to be happy unless they are causing pain and suffering to others. (Note the comment made to Hey Hey about looks, which I personally found rude and offensive, whether he took it that way or not). I wish for Silke to have the strength to ignore the darts and arrows tossed her way by your heckler. (Being nice here--had something all together different written at first) I have found nothing in her posts over the last week that would warrent hostility toward her or her poetry. It is exquisite and beyond beautiful. She is obviously a loving and gentle soul and you are truely a very lucky man. Keep taking care of her.
Thank you for the information regarding your grandfather. I hope to live to such a grand agae, although I hope to do so with my hair intact.

now youre just talking too much


MAKE ME A SANDWICH!

Hey Rick, can you time-warp as well? I actually liked the newer photo - looked very distinguished.

Hey Hey

Never saw the movie. But thank you--I think. lol
Better then being told I look like Dana Plato from Diff'rent Strokes.

Errrr, do we have a title yet?

Hey Hey

It takes a great erotic poem to inspire this many replies. That could be a title: "Great Erotic Poem." (too generic, eh?)

Yes Hey Hey
I've titled it with my first instinct, which was re-enforced by Steven
Start the Dance

and thank you Rick...I'll remember that title for the next one I'm stuck on.

im just here for the filler.

Maybe we should accumulate all of the replies and submit them as a separate poem. eh?

I think that I've been taken over by aliens - what happened?

Dear +Steven

Please don't go.

I'm sorry 4 contributing to some of the monkey business but I'm just trying to lighten my load a little. You and Silke are very special and I want to take some of your suffering. Send some brain waves my way.

Please don't go.

Hey Hey

+Steven

ps Heisenberg was a sh*t. Some things ARE certain. You and Silke are wonders.

Hey Hey