One of my submissives fantasies is for me to have sex with another woman..so I gave in to my boyfriend, but not the way he thought it was going to go down..


I make him undress and kneel against the wall and watch while I chain the females wrists to the rafters in our barn..then place a spreader bar between her feet. Then I begin running the tip of my crop over her body making sure i didnt miss any spots then I message her with my tongue..sucke and twiste her nipples until they become hard..I put clamps on them..then I slap my flogger across her body softly at first building with intensity..stopping in between to turn on remote control vibrating egg inside of her..pulling on the clamp chain while tesing her clit with another vibrator. Once her moans get louder..I make my male sub help me get into my strapon..then I put a hood over his head so he couldnt see anything..and the rest is just pure torture for him and her, because I made her call out my name and beg me for release before she can cum. Every time she did I told my sub that I could have her take his place anytime I need to be satisfed.

While this was a very image-filled write, and definately a kinky piece, I would have preferred to have seen some kind of poetic format placed into the wording and writing of this.

It felt more like something one would submit to a hot sex-forum mag, more like a story than an erotic 'poem'.

I don't mean this as to be offensive in any way, for I rather enjoyed the images, myself, I just think that it could use some re-structuring.

Safe journey
Aiyana