With every

penned word-

he strokes her.

Salaciously.

Intentionally.

He...

an aphrodisiac

of expressions-

arouses her

deeply.

Sticky sweet

wetness

induced,

she saturates

the mental

fingers

his words

have become.

And greedily-

anticipates

the next-

utterly surprised

by these images

he provokes.

She envisions

herself

in the ways

he speaks of...

Like snapshots

in her head-

she captures each.

And moving

with

the seductive rhythm

he creates-

she throbs

in exquisite agony.

always left

wanting

more...

needing

to be more...

The way that you made the poem flow by the way you consturcted the work.
Your descriptiveness, the color of your usage, it was masterful.
This was an excellant piece, absolutely excellant!!!


until...

I absolutey agree with strngr.
This was masterly done.

I could feel the heat in every line, the passion overflowing my imagination.

Safe joureny
Aiyana