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anonymust
my forehead is hot in the middle.

are you all still trying to write the perfect poem?

foolish!

I tell you, .... why?

why end the quest?


you like my poem today?
AmbientSnowflake
You had something ligitimate to say. But you do not have to make long topic title without a ligitimate reason.

It's not exceptable behavior, mostly because it's stupid. I think it's inconsiderate.
AmbientSnowflake
You had something ligitimate to say. But you do not have to make long topic title without a ligitimate reason.

It's not exceptable behavior, mostly because it's stupid. I think it's inconsiderate.
anonymust
AmbientSnowFlake?

change your name kid.

youre concern is with the topic length??
what a nerd, what a sad sad person.

damn snow flake- you are WAY too cool for me!
give it break tits.
AmbientSnowflake
The topics title, "~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~," is too long. It's a matter of following house edicate. You didn't have a title with any letters from the English language. If you want to get personal and call me names then you can get the hell out of here.

The content of your post is another story. It's very savvy, cocky. You broke through the wall between the writer, and the reader. It seems like you even mock yourself. You realize the futility of writing a poem, that it's not going to be all that great. Still, you write, nonetheless.
Shawn
the title has been shortened. In general, there's no problem with having long titles if there's a space every so often, but without the spaces, the whole title gets represented on one line and forces the width of the forum to be as wide as the title, which oftentimes is wider than the visitors preferred browser width. It's a problem that can easily be fixed by tweaking the forum code, and I will make a note of it so that it gets fixed when time permits.
anonymust
It seems like you even mock yourself"- and so what? does this hurt you? does it hurt your feelings to see me "mock" myself?

What are you? my parents??


sad sad snow flake. its ok babybird, I'll put some love in you, if you allow me.

i love you.
anonymust
cool picture shawn
+Steven Curtis Lance
anonymust, I enjoy your sense of humor and your utterly unique perspective.

You are... very refreshing.

Respect and Solidarity.
anonymust
awe shucks Steven


I KNEW someone would get me here.

thanks for being that person,

much - o - respect to you.

*bows and exits rooms*
+Steven Curtis Lance
Yes, actually, I think I really do get you.

You are like a performance artist; each of your posts is an utterly unique art-work, which has meaning on many levels.

You are fascinating, and you drive some people crazy; I like that in a person.

You remind me of myself.

When all of us poets are banished and split off from neuroscience here, and go into the wilderness, will you come along with us? I have no idea what to expect, but it could be good. I want free spirits to come with me.

Keep up the good work of being your enigmatic self. Lucky for you--and for me--I am easily the most liberal person on this site.

I love the way you handle the Flake, I must admit (a guilty pleasure).

Respect and Solidarity.
Shawn
QUOTE (anonymust @ Jul 23, 10:32 AM)
cool picture shawn

thanks. It was only a 2 sec job in Illustrator CS using their default concentric circles shape and then inverting and cropping in Photoshop.
AmbientSnowflake
QUOTE (anonymust @ Jul 23, 09:29 AM)
and so what? does this hurt you? does it hurt your feelings to see me "mock" myself?

I am deeply, utterly, cut to the bone, that you mock yourself. I lost sleep over it last night. It upsets my stomach to know that there are people out in the world mocking themselves. I am inexplicabley horrified. Surely, I am.

I must be. I did say that, right?
anonymust
ha!


you better be.


Have a nice day fellow psycho smile.gif
AmbientSnowflake
You tick like a time bomb.
anonymust
I do?


well........................its..........about..........."time"...........


.........something.............went.............OFF.


yeah baby.
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