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hooverl
It’s lonely here without you
I knew that it would be…
It’s worse than I thought it could be

Long walks to my bed
Alone every night
A quick prayer before I fall
I pray you’re alright

Falling asleep…
My arm around a pillow
I long for it to be you…

A lucid dream…
Your skin against mine
The touch of your lips
Will be mine….in time

It’s lonely here without you
I knew that it would be…
It’s worse than I thought it could be
Silke Lance
I really enjoyed reading this!
I can relate.....

Thanks for posting.

~Greetings

Silke Lance
AmbientSnowflake
That's a pretty descent poem.
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