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titch
Enigmatic Performance

Incongruously as a hungry grebe, with a bustle of desire
labouring over well-met style and nectar about your lips -
Melt in love once more - life's rigmarole sympathised
knowing the secret from head to toe, gentle longing
All attentions apparently outside the course of mundane life
and to us only merry obvious reason, beyond understanding!

I assure you of the prospect of pleasure, passions glitter
Being extricably involved, and with all of my care, O fine lover -
enigmatic performance scattered, both of us with spring in our eyes
Knowing the magic displayed, guaranteed of friendly disposition
dialect numberless, and physical possession each with a claim !

Without undertaking defence - rashness preferred befitted -
take me fine lover - looking after yourself - be mine!

Titch





And joyous eternity soon replied, ebb flow infinite
and happiness to the stars - vortex tender things
O Present mountain rise, sparkling waters falling
unshaken and cometh to air, love from my bosom


©Titch K 2004
selina
I hadn't taken the time to read your poetry before, but now I will make a point to go back and view it!
You write so beautifully. You paint a symphony. It is very inspiring. It also makes me jealous that I didn't think of it first!

Selina
Silke Lance
QUOTE (titch @ Jul 12, 08:58 AM)
Without undertaking defence - rashness preferred befitted -
take me fine lover - looking after yourself - be mine!

~I really like those two lines!

BEAUTIFUL!

Thanks for sharing~
Please,keep posting~

Silke Lance
titch
hi selina - have only been here a few days SMILE
I knew steve way back and decided how nice it would be to read him again
so here i am SMILE
titch
hi there silke

unsure if the poet is supposed to have a fav line SMILE
But if yes, i would pick those you have

many blessings
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