selina
Jul 11, 2004, 05:38 PM
Framed in Ink
I shall write for you a poem,
no better or no worse,
than are poems of other women
who write in metered verse.
But in my words you’ll hear my heart,
its beat in steady pace,
you’ll sense my soul and inner self,
see glimpses of my face.
My spirit soars with pen in hand,
my thoughts then framed in ink,
you’ll find my passions and desires,
you’ll see just how I think.
And on this page I give to you
you’ll find my heart and soul,
one moment I’ll be scattered,
then next you’ll find me whole.
For in my verse I find my voice
and you might hear it too,
on paper I complete myself,
and bare my soul to you.
You’ll learn my fantasies and more,
sorrows and joys of my world,
you’ll sit beside the woman,
and play beside the girl.
misty_tears
Jul 12, 2004, 08:43 AM
Aww, expressed with fluent emotion. well written and structured peice. nice write indeed.
My pen in my hand
Poised above the paper
Like a man behind a woman
With its stiffness
I begin to press its tip into the page
Your body jerks away
As if from a tattooist's needle
Trembling from its pain and its permanence
I stroke your hair reassuringly and tell you:
"It is only words and ink and fantasy"
Your fingers dig into my thigh
Blessing the progress of my prose
"Where are we now?” you ask
"Alone on an island; the world turning only for us"
"Only for us..." you echo back, steadying your breath
" This will be our story" I continue
"Our story..." your voice slowly cracking
Questions consuming you like a forest fire
Or a virus
I lift my pen to remind you
That this is only words and ink and fantasy
...the infection rages on
The diamonds in your eyes become carbon black pebbles
And fall like the shadows of snowflakes
I watch as your skin and your blood
Turn translucent from doubt and from fear
I see your heart
Pulsing like a jellyfish swimming away from me
Helpless, I can only look on
As you reach out, grasping at nothing
Your form fading from my view
I write the final lines in the air
Letters and ink dropping to the floor
Making no sound
misty......
selina
Jul 12, 2004, 05:17 PM
nice one, misty
I have a few poems similar to that one
onecross31
Jul 12, 2004, 07:51 PM
Selina , this is a good work that you have done . How long have you been writing? I have written off and on for about 19yrs. I wrote this one during the first gulf war in the Red Sea.
A grain of sand.
We are each in ourselves ,
a grain of sand ,
When moved by the wind,
we explore distant lands.
A child at the beach ,
builds castles made of sand .
But this child does not know ,
that what He builds is man.
onecross31
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Jul 13, 2004, 05:26 AM
| QUOTE (onecross31 @ Jul 12, 07:51 PM) |
A grain of sand.
We are each in ourselves , a grain of sand , When moved by the wind, we explore distant lands. A child at the beach , builds castles made of sand . But this child does not know , that what He builds is man. |
that is absolutely remarkable, onecross31. The 'grain of sand' brought up an association with William Blake's piece (To see the world in a grain of sand, and a Heaven in a wild flower, To hold infinity in the palm of your hand, and Eternity in an hour). In terms of quality, they're comparable in that they're both remarkable and have mystical aspects. But subject-wise, the poems are nothing alike. Is your poem published anywhere (it should be)? Is it a completely novel creation that you created out of thin air, or were you inspired by something, or were you otherwise influenced by anything?
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